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The Poetic Death

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The grief of a madwoman 
Serenades us, "dead, dead, dead!". 
She cries, "My sweet smelling buds 
Were ripped from my marriage bed". 

Her lament keeps all awake, 
Even the deceased, whose skulls 
Lay in grass and stones that crack 
Above their feet. Useless lull! 

Is her madness her own fault? 
Was it beguiled by hate? 
Was it by the hand of man, 
Or drawn from the pen of fate?  

Her singsong was her last act 
Before a branch failed her shoe, 
Now she floats with her own grief, 
While the ravens hum and coo. 

Edited.

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<Deleted User> (17799)

Fri 2nd Feb 2018 04:34

Beautifully written!

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 2nd Aug 2017 08:59

love it - the picture is a take on the original I believe?

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Martin Elder

Tue 1st Aug 2017 22:43

I love the line' Snuggling her corpse like a grave' in particular. The whole piece definitely has a nineteenth or eighteenth century feel about it.
Nice one

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