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Wearing Thin

More frequently now, come moments

When life wears thin

And through the threadbare tissue

That we call family, community, society

That we call culture, values, mores

I see the loneliness of the living

And, more surely, the loneliness of the dead

Beyond the manufacture and the fabrication

Lies the truth, which some have named beautiful

And some have named despair

Aloneness, all-one-ness, loneliness

Each and all and each and all alone

Entropic by nature,

By nature we are pulled

Magnetic poles, together

Creative by nature, together

Creative, we weave a life, a world

More warp than weft

We darn, patch, repair

But more frequently now, come moments

When life wears thin

◄ Earsplitting

Navel gazing ►

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raypool

Tue 27th Jun 2017 21:11

Lovely flow of thought Hazel. It has a spell behind it that keeps you in the folds - so correct as we look back. I often do and have written on it, so respect here.

Ray

patricia Hughes

Tue 27th Jun 2017 20:21

When life wears thin is a fantastic line.

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 27th Jun 2017 17:18

Bless you Stu. I haven't written anything for ages (obviously been far too happy!!!) but it was great to be back on the blog today.

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Stu Buck

Tue 27th Jun 2017 12:27

this is excellent. those opening two lines are beautiful and the pace and skill doesnt let off. i really enjoyed this.

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