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See you up there at love o'clock

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Only a moment ago I felt my love for you rise above the ordinary.

Locked in truth and spirit.

It’s a miracle that happened because we did not push. We just opened the doors and it wafted in.

We never pushed for acceptance or approval.

And it came, again and again and again. Filling us. Flooding us.

Our union is destined for eternity. It is not of this world.

I listen as you sing of your love in soft tones, you speak at a slow seductive pace.

Arousing my amazement at your uninterrupted flow of energy.

I have never questioned our growing bond. Why should I? You are part of my divine inheritance.

And when we’re done with this world we can look forward to

our celestial rendezvous, intertwined in an intimate and eternal embrace.

See you up there at love o’clock.

◄ Nothing's changed

To my Angel who waits ►

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Raj Ferds

Tue 27th Jun 2017 05:49

I'm glad you liked it Kitty.

Take care.
Raj x

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Raj Ferds

Sun 25th Jun 2017 14:25

You don't have to apologise to me dear girl.
You comments are always welcome even if they are belated.

Raj

Jemima Jones

Sun 25th Jun 2017 12:07

I'm somewhat ashamed Raj,to have not commented on this absolutely lovely piece of work before now.My apologies and thanks.Jemima.

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Raj Ferds

Sun 25th Jun 2017 06:33

Your comments never fail to intrigue and entertain dear Rose cause thou speak in many tongues !!!!?

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Sat 24th Jun 2017 23:19

hey Loz! if it does as me old mother used to say it does as in 'putting hairs on yer chest'....then,


its a wonder I ain't tripping over me own titbush!

???


Rose ?....but tongue-free!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 23rd Jun 2017 09:42

Rooose!! Smut! ?

And Raj - trust me, I do.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 23rd Jun 2017 09:22

did you get my second telepathic email Raj? the one I sent to MR.NICE @ LOVEWORLD.COM.

seriously methinks that this way of communication may very well be a thing of the near future.

save on lekky though!

see you at tongue past sex! ??

Rose ?

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Raj Ferds

Fri 23rd Jun 2017 06:33

Laura I'm so so pleased for you. Celebrate the moment dear girl. Don't look back. See it as some divine intervention and cherish what is NOW

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Laura Taylor

Thu 22nd Jun 2017 16:06

Aye, I really am Raj, but it did come after a lifetime of horrors. And it did come completely unexpectedly. I've never been so happy as I have these last 7ish years ? Thank you ?

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Raj Ferds

Thu 22nd Jun 2017 14:34

Laura if you are experience this level of relationship you are blessed. The choir of angels will constantly serenade you and sprinkle that glittering angel dust all over you and your beloved.

Spread your peace Laura. An share your love and compassion too.

Raj x



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Raj Ferds

Thu 22nd Jun 2017 14:30

Thank you my dear Rose. Your encouragement is precious and inspirational.

With loving kindness.
Raj

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Laura Taylor

Thu 22nd Jun 2017 13:26

This is pretty much my own relationship, how it developed. I can't help but love this poem. So gentle and beautiful. You have a real raw talent at capturing and expressing these feelings - comes no doubt from your peaceful and equal inner soul.

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Wed 21st Jun 2017 08:27

you really have excelled yourself here Raj.
Your exposure's of love and all that goes with it gets better and better.

I am almost in a state of gasping anticipation for the next
one.

Which I'm sure will further enhance my adoration's of all that you offer with great kindness and truth.

as always,with love


Rose ?

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Raj Ferds

Tue 20th Jun 2017 11:45

Oh Cynthia, I always treasure your feedback simply because of your insights. The illustration is definitely a contributing factor.

But at the end of the day the words and image combine to leave each reader with their own interpretation. Their own personal 'take away'.

Thanks you and keep the beautiful energy going!
Raj

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 20th Jun 2017 11:24

This is interesting. It could be about absolutely 'anything'. The photo is lovely.

Surely the illustration is intended as a guide to widen our horizons of interpretation. But, maybe not. Perhaps I read too much into a picture. But why would anyone use a picture if it isn't an extended contribution to a poem? To work together? Just wondering, Raj, just wondering.

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