Unrequited Love

Te amo tanto que me duele 
You didn't get that, did you? 
But can't you see it in my face 
a love that aches my very soul 

Like Mars, ' I'll catch a grenade for ya!'
but you must be Venus...do you not see
it is my will I am stuck in love? 

amo tanto que me duele!'
You gaze into my pupils and 
seem oblivious to my 
God free me from this 

unrequited love

◄ Domestic Drama (Part 2)

Freestyle verse #1 ►


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Juan Pablo Lynch

Tue 13th Jun 2017 02:02

Glad you liked it Colin. Dolor means pain in Spanish and I am pretty sure I spelled it right. Maybe it doesn't fit that well but I was trying to rhyme it with amor.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 12th Jun 2017 08:52

I love the mix of Spanish and English alongside Bruno Mars and Roman mythology.

I think the first two verses work really well but for me the third is less convincing perhaps because of the word 'dolor' which is rather an oddity. I'm not sure but it might be spelt 'dolour'. It's not a word I am familiar with.

all the best

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