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YOUTH TRAGEDY

 

Many millions strong, an army in the making

of powerful emotions and thoughts.

What is my generation to think of this?

Young in my own eyes, two generations under me

are rising above me right now.

Some make it, some don’t, some are good and do it right,

some are bad and do dark deeds.

They better do it right as soon they’ll be running

this damn country, coming into jobs

and careers – responsible ones.

Laws of averages, rise and fall,

what do we make of the crazy ones?

Stealing cars, selling drugs, mugging pensioners.

What comes around goes around

but right now many fall and some don’t make it.

Teenage suicide, hard times, cost of life.

Only so much prison some can take.

White, black, asian, all creeds.

All the same and an island of emotions,

let loose in an uncertain world.

Good ones are separated by a dividing line,

doing apprenticeships, finding jobs,

a new career. How the gap widens, of no in-betweens,

just people who live their lives and in their own worlds.

 

 

WHAT MAKES A MAN DO WHAT HE DOES?

 

The man who almost boasts I’m up for attempted murder

as I knifed a bloke who attacked my wife. Does this make me bad?

What about the bomber pilot who does his mission and bombs

a city, killing the enemy in their beds. Is he bad?

What about the woman who abuses her own son, 6 years old?

Is she bad, does she have a reason or is she so deranged?

Ask some shrink and what will they say? Why, it’s all cause

and effect – life made them like this and will continue to do so.

I make my own opinions and I do my best to be a decent bloke

but my past hovers so near and far, I move on and do my best.

Tell me… Can a murderer become the man he was before?

Or should he be condemned to death, an eye for an eye?

Answers are hidden…

 

 

◄ new poem based on small PT boats in the Pacific war

southern song poem ►

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nick armbrister

Thu 22nd Oct 2009 21:30

yes jeff likewise i enjoyed meeting you will have to do so again in the future. let me know when the next one is. we'll meet again. thanx for reading.

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Jeff Dawson

Thu 22nd Oct 2009 20:30

Hi Nick, good to meet you at Oldham, I'm just catching up now the tour's finished. Like Youth Tragedy, very strong stuff. Reminds me of 'There has to be hope' that I wrote and Cayn White performs, although this has stronger wording, good stuff, see ya around Jeff

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nick armbrister

Fri 2nd Oct 2009 20:15

many thanx for reading nicky well its a poem from the late 90s but relevant today. the kids are animals and what can i say? no discipline. look at the news. anyhow i dont writie much poetry anymore but the odd one when in the mood i do dark fiction/romance but people wanna see my old poems live or read them so i dont mind sharing my work, not at all. and i like to inspire people to write.

i saw the result of some young people the other week in town it involved the worst crimes going, so things are on the waydown, not up. if i havent put that poem here i will. youll emphathise with it.

i get asked to write happy work, i do at times. they should see my dark fiction, oh now that is my real love. my poems are like messing about lol.

and when the world tears itself to bits i wanna front row seat. i think the third world war is long over due lol. thanx fo reading, nick:)xx

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Nichola Burrows

Fri 2nd Oct 2009 11:09

'youth tragedy' holds a wealth of fear and uncertainty regarding the future. The youth culture is sadley degenerating as each generation succeeds the next, a devolving of our humanity rather than the gradual evolution of man. Maybe we will go full circle and and devolve back to cavemen - life was much simpler then - however there would probably be gangs of youths clubbing each other to death rather than street shootouts and joyriding bison rather than cars. The onset of scientific thinking and technology has been the catalyst in the general greed of man which will no doubt destroy itself eventually. So mankind has only itself to blame for the general degeneration of each generation of youths, and the enlightened ones amongst the masses, either sit back, watch and study human nature or find that they are merely one voice crying out against the darkness.

Interestingly enough, I am not a particularly religious person because I question too much, but religion as a form of control has been replaced not by free thinking, but in the main part by peer pressure.

Very thought provoking and current poem.

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