Darkness
Listen to the whispers of night
distant sounds and impenetrable sights
The wind and rustle of the trees
a ghostly creak of a door ill at ease
Shapes and sounds do readily colllide
from which no one awake can hide
A dog howls, two cats fight
sounds that cause fear to stike
Thoughts within reflect the dark
and their reality becomes more stark
Only time will herald the day
and cast night´s shadows far away
<Deleted User> (13762)
Tue 25th Apr 2017 08:24
err, there's something not right about this page Keith as it appears as if I have posted it. There is no Like button but an Edit button instead. I think I have found a WoL glitch !! Anyone else getting the same here? Same on your previous entry but beyond that it reverts to normal. Have alerted the moderator. Col.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Tue 25th Apr 2017 08:21
you've captured this really well Keith - I particularly like that ill at ease door. I also like to find word patterns within lines whether intentional or not - like the double l's in 'ill' and 'collide' although you have inadvertently used three in 'colllide'. Good stuff. Col.
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Garry Rowlands
Sun 30th Apr 2017 17:50
Like this a lot.