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Drop The Rope

drop the rope

in this tug-of-war

there is no hope of victory

 

you won't pull it to ground

you've tried long enough.

your battle has become

a Chinese finger trap

you will only succeed

in hurting yourself.

 

the time has come

to rest your anger

it looks tired now

put it to bed 

and let it lie.

 

 

 

 

 

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Paul Waring

Mon 24th Apr 2017 23:13

Thanks Gary for the kind compliment.

Aythangyow too, Ray. I'm still laughing at your brilliant last line.

Paul

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raypool

Mon 24th Apr 2017 14:53

A soft answer turneth away wrath Paul; but in truth it often just inflames the antagonist, especially if there is a deeper issue. In which case the rope can be handy in other ways....

Ray

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Garry Rowlands

Mon 24th Apr 2017 10:59

Beautifully done . Like the idea

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Paul Waring

Mon 24th Apr 2017 09:33

Thanks elP, thanks for the good point and the funny image that it conjures up!

Thanks too Suki, I'm well and thanks for asking, hope you are too. I always enjoy reading the extra dimensions of interpretation you add.

Paul

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suki spangles

Mon 24th Apr 2017 04:58

Hi Paul,

Hope you're keeping well.

Sometimes, it's best to not pick up the rope to begin with, but not so easy.

I wonder whether sometimes when we hold onto the rope it's because there is a strange comfort derived from it - a sort of familiarity; an indulgence almost. Dropping the rope and letting go means moving on, and growing up, and perhaps sometimes that prospect is a little to scary..

Cheers,
Suki

elPintor

Mon 24th Apr 2017 03:04

And, Paul, you can't forget the joy of watching your tug-o-war opponent fly backward onto his seat when you give your final unexpected release...

elP

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Paul Waring

Mon 24th Apr 2017 00:12

Thank you David, Cynthia and Martin for your kind comments. I'm very grateful to you all.


Paul

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Apr 2017 17:42

yes well put Paul, it is always important to know when to withdraw and let go of the rope
Nice one

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 23rd Apr 2017 15:50

Totally awesome advice succinctly put.

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