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Pilgrim Station: Dominic James, SPM Publications

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Pilgrim Station is a first collection that, according to James, was written over a period of eight years “in the advent of middle age, that downhill-sloping, happy time, that has brought me to concentrate on poetry, the subject at hand”.  This generous collection of 63 poems explores a range of topics of a philosophical nature which gives them both a personal and a universal appeal. The title is redolent of a journey of self-discovery, a shaping of past and present in order to arrive at some kind of future direction.

James is a bookish poet. There are quotations from Browning, Lowell and William Carlos Williams, there is a poem about RS Thomas and his collected poems, and there are references to Roman and Norse mythology. He shows a willingness to try his hand at a variety of styles both past and present. Of particular interest to me was the poem ‘Riddle’ in which he attempts to imitate some of the salient features of Old English verse forms. Behind the idea, there is also, of course, an echo of the Old English riddles themselves.

James is also an inveterate traveller and poetry of place is clearly important to him. A number of place names crop up in the poems, as far apart as Florence and Istanbul, Marrakech and the river Jordan, Egypt and Paris. Some of the poems could be set anywhere and, although, like the opening poem ‘Deserter’ they sound distinctly foreign, it is often only the inclusion of a single word that can help to anchor the location. Other poems, such as ‘The Guildford Line’ and ‘Mud Bank Apple Trees’ are set closer to home.

Water, whether it be rain, sea or flood, is an element that flows freely through these poems. In poems such as ‘Geneva Rain’ and ‘Late Home’ it is also something that James is particularly skilled at writing about. In ‘Late Home’ he writes eloquently about the aftermath of a sudden downpour of rain:

                       

                              sluiced underground

     an oily babble mimics well the human tongue’s

     gullet-leak, softens in blind passages,

     rubs brick-faced clay and drain-deep stone:

                             a flooded

     vast, internal system, capillaried in taps

     and cisterns, rising through the inky homes

     locked in sprays of light.

 

Even though the rain has ceased falling, there is much, like these poems, that continues to go on beneath the surface.

The harshness of the city or a barren landscape, “these dusty shoes crunching the white chalk road” is counterbalanced by love poems, such as ‘Head over heels over head’ and the soft radiance of poems like ‘Quince zone’ and ‘Anemone’ which portray with sensitivity and observation the wonders of the natural world. Time and again, James demonstrates this gift that he has for writing about seemingly mundane things in a way which is refreshing and arresting, as shown in these opening lines from ‘To Oscar’:

 

    On the river bed of night

     I have laid with a pebble

     pressed into the middle vertebrae

     where spades paddled my ribs,

 

    I awake. Last year’s dinner gong

     reverberates in my ears

     my nose is red, my hair

     further receded, belly more big

 

     throat dry, nose blocked:

     I have got a cold

     from the weekend’s snot-nosed kid,

     Oscar, two and a half years old.

 

These are well-crafted poems, written with intelligence, depth and feeling. They do not offer up everything they have to give first time round, but store within them hidden strengths that await discovery on subsequent readings.

Neil Leadbeater

 

Dominic James, Pilgrim Station, SPM Publications, £10.45

 

 

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WilliamHeuser

Thu 7th Mar 2024 01:53

I find it interesting how James juxtaposes the harshness of urban or barren landscapes with love poems like 'Head over heels over head' and the gentle radiance of poems such as 'Quince zone' and 'Anemone,' which celebrate the wonders of the natural world.
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Dominic James

Tue 18th Apr 2017 14:38

That's £7.50 plus p&p. Thank you Neil and Write Out Loud.
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