TONGUE TWISTER
He shot his mouth off with his tongue
what a mess.
What he is on about
is anybody's guess.
Airwaves recoil
perplexed
at the mortal injury they sustain
and yet
in the wider context
nobody seems to complain.
Comments
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 10th Apr 2017 09:23
well put Ray - not that complaining gets you anywhere.
yes I agree with David the last line is the telling one.
very good Ray
Love it
Ray, I also like this for its cleverness, including the title, and for its message, expressed so well.
Cheers playmate,
Paul
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raypool
Tue 11th Apr 2017 17:18
Thanks a lot David, Paul, Martin and Colin - I feel good for your likes and I agree the last line has a bit of a punch. People do get away with a lot of hot air - but not us lot i'm sure!!
Ray