Sin
A light folding cloth
against her skin
white weave holding
its pink warmth within
it moves with my eyes
tight white and thin
unconcerned by my
watching
her shadowed cleft
and sin.
Words and foto Tommy Carroll
Comments
Good work Tommy.
A beautifully sculptured and tastefully delivered theme.
Subtly sexual. you have also proved that "less is more".
Raj
Great piece,Tommy, beautifully crafted. It's my problem that 'sin' and 'sexuality' grate needlessly against each other.
Really good one Tommy.
You say so much with so little. what poetry should say!
Good work
Frances Macaulay Forde
Tue 4th Apr 2017 05:49
Sensual whilst restrained... but very effective.
Well done.
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<Deleted User> (17799)
Fri 30th Jun 2017 00:51
? great concept and love the flow