Take action.
Strike a blow.
Ring the anvil.
Pace. Drive. Beat.
Be dynamis. Perpetual origin.
Chain reaction ignition.
Strike hot iron. Watch hammer-sparks ignite satellite flames,
Orbiting original impetus: You.
Gravitational fulcrum.
Nuclear furnace.
Primal energy.
Ignite your world with positivity. Watch the wildfire.
positivity positive action energy chain reaction positive feedback
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sun 26th Mar 2017 09:28
lots of powerful hammer blow lines ringing out here Rich. For the sake of aesthetics I would be tempted to tap those 'watch' lines down a notch so that they don't stick out. Good stuff - like Dyphrent's recent Poem of the Week 'Man' there is a strong beat, a poem also that could be lengthened. Reminds me also of a couple of early 80's industrial bands that used tools and metal objects to make something resembling music - Tools You Can Trust, SPK.
thanks for posting. Col
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Rich
Tue 28th Mar 2017 21:12
Thanks Col, really good to read your thoughts. I shall check out the band.
Thanks for your comment.