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Repeat

Rinse repeat 
the soul clean 
walk the tightrope 
to my dreams 
pull apart 
my stitches and seams 
bleed out the bleak 
buries me beneath 
drowning in defeat 
living on my knees 
upside down 
the yellow screams 
in threes.


©JMCole 

defeat

◄ Wayward

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New Shoes

Fri 24th Mar 2017 06:47

It took me a few reads, then I got it, that is except for "the yellow bleeds of threes" the second thought was, the that most bad things happen in threes. but even then there is the "yellow".

Curious

thanks for your profound, simplistic rendition.

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Lisa McLean

Thu 23rd Mar 2017 23:45

Wow, love this. I can totally relate. Nice work!

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