One swollen calamity
Crawls from between
The bloody legs of another
While the rain/the fire
Flicks, a buzz roll on the pane
I can taste the honey in your sighs
You are a needle in my arm
Your tongue traces galaxies around my navel
Flattening my hairs like pine trees in a storm
Stu, I really admire how you consistently conjure up such exotic fayre to share with us. There are so many powerful, sensual images and so much passion in these crafted words.
Like Raj, I also think the line 'your tongue traces galaxies around my navel' is brilliant but 'I can taste the honey in your sighs' is so very, very evocative.
Great stuff Stu, thanks.
Paul
Your tongue traces galaxies around my navel. Brilliant.
Love the title too Stuart.
Raj
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Tommy Carroll
Sat 18th Feb 2017 15:26
Keep that stuff coming Stu. Tommy