Give me the sound of a thousand hearts beating
S t a g g e r r e d to make one thrum of knowledge
Of life.
Oh how I would love to melt you down
Like darkest chocolate, would you flow between my tongue
And the part of me that has no name
To mingle with spit and soul
Hold me until the light comes once more
Luxurious and tactile , a splendid seam of poetry mined by the finest of wordsmiths I know Stu.
Ray
Last two lines are incredibly effective in syphoning the previous ones down into a pinprick. Love it!
elPintor
Tue 14th Feb 2017 12:34
"the part of me that has no name" is where you really got me..that's the part that's the hardest reach...
and "thrum"--like throb and drum together--is a great word esp in the context.
elP
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Tue 14th Feb 2017 09:22
we're all envious of that chocolate line
Rich and sensual Stu, nailed by the darkest chocolate line.
Paul
I'm liking this, Stu. That line 'melt you down like darkest chocolate'... Perfect. ?
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suki spangles
Thu 16th Feb 2017 12:54
Ferrero Rocher should use this in their next ad campaign!