TICKET TO PARADISE
Serenity
golden beach
kalua kiss
the state of bliss
these are tricks of the brochure
and online courting
the lure and bait of extortion
in a velvet glove
it seems to me
available for all eternity.
Comments
you cynical old dog you! i fear you are quite right however, and have expressed this with your usual blackly comical touch. bravo sir.
Thanks for commenting Paul and Suki. I'm not sure if I should be so scathing but it takes one cynic to recognize it elsewhere I suppose. As David suggests, undertones of eternal bliss may lie elsewhere...
Ray
That's marketing for you. I hope those cynics read this.
Suki
The cynical selling of dreams, captured so well Ray.
Paul
Truth is my stepson and his girlfriend took us out for a meal today, lovely gesture - they just got back from the Maldives and the Iphones came out and - well, you know how it is, running commentary during the pasta.
Apart from that, there can't be anything obvious from me . Well spotted mate.
Ray
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raypool
Tue 14th Feb 2017 10:38
Thanks Stu: If I won the lottery my cynicism might just disperse; but I don't do it so that's it. Thanks for liking.
Hope you're well.
Ray