The Surgeon
Gotta be patient This is pathetic
To operate.... Obviously no anaesthetics
A sick surgeon As the doctor and the patient
Urged on To put himself under the knife
By a cancerous tumour
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I wrote this without the even thinking about the V format. it was only when I started typing it here at WOL that I got inspired to lay the poem out as a V starting from Gotta be patient to this is pathetic. Actually had to omit a few lines closing lines to get this lay out.
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elPintor
Sun 5th Feb 2017 22:55
Even before I read your comment, the layout came to seem as the cut of a surgeon into skin..a very effective visual.
elP