Green light emerges from the breathing trees
under the influence of a persuasive sun
colouring the lives of sleeping souls.
Blue light emerges from a tranquil sea
under the influence of a persuasive moon
colouring the dreams of sleeping souls.
Dej 09
<Deleted User> (6576)
Wed 23rd Sep 2009 20:12
This is beautiful. I begin to feel quite dreamy as i read it.
<Deleted User> (5646)
Thu 17th Sep 2009 00:20
Like a water-colour sketch. Beautifully expressed.
Janet.x
Excellent. The slower I read it the better it gets for some reason
<Deleted User> (6484)
Tue 15th Sep 2009 17:38
What a wonderful imagination you have Deborah, enjoyed this very much.
Bernie
steve mellor
Tue 15th Sep 2009 17:31
Hi DebR
Beautifully colour-washed. I feel all the better for this.
Steve M :-))))
Peaceful beauty : )
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Ann Foxglove
Tue 15th Dec 2009 18:18
Simple and lovely.