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Virtuality

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Hope was a fragile angel

born of words.

A candlelight in the distance

on a dark night

after many dark nights.

A shifting shape,

a pattern in sand

formed by the wind

of our words.

A phantom of reality,

out of reach

yet always in sight.

Flickering like sunlight

between the birches.

Always there,

in the corner of my vision,

moving, like a breeze

across the grasses,

a ripple on the water

and I moved toward it.

Comes a shadow,

a turn,

a mere whisper

of a silken dress

among the trees

on another path

and the phantom is gone.

Too intangeable.

Never more

than the outline,

of the word,

hope.

 Dej  March 09

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Cate Greenlees

Thu 20th Aug 2009 15:22

Just caught up on this one Deborah,.... it has a very etherial feel to it... I love it. In dark times hope is something we all need to feel, and reach out for, but it is a long up hill journey.
Cate xx

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Thu 13th Aug 2009 11:40

I love this! Super imagery throughout.
as Gus says, wonderful.

Janet.x

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 12th Aug 2009 20:26

Your easy wonderous words just floor me...
wonderful, wonderful, once again

Gus xx

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