Earth and Sky

So many shades of green

Lime, fern, shamrock, juniper and parakeet

Some bask in the island sun

While others sway in the cool shade of lazy clouds

They all climb

So many shades of green

They all climb

But they never reach the wide blue 

And the blue can never desecnd 

What is there to do?

Let it rain, let it rain

The sky goddess shed tears for the earth god

Grubby brown roots soak up the tears and green crowns grow

So many shades of green

They all climb 

And sing praises to the wide blue

nature.

◄ Krypto's song

The last book ►

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Rhiannon

Fri 3rd Feb 2017 20:22

Really nice use of imagery, like painting a picture. The many shades of green climbing into the wide blue, beautiful.

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Rich

Fri 27th Jan 2017 21:05

Really like this with the cyclical nature and link between life and the physical environment. And the link to the etheric, too.

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Juan Pablo Lynch

Sun 22nd Jan 2017 19:15

Thanks everyone for your compliments. I was actually inspired to write this as I was looking at the mountains. I'm in a small Caribbean island and there is no escaping a mountain view. There is even a dormant volcano here.

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lynn hahn

Fri 20th Jan 2017 04:19

Love this one shows the true relationship

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Randall Eckstein

Fri 20th Jan 2017 01:33

Ooh, gave me chills. I love the imagery, and after reading your bio, I feel like it might be a reflection of your youth growing up in the wonderful places where the world is green and blue.

Simply a beautiful poem and a wonderful vision of a natural world.

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jane wilcock

Thu 19th Jan 2017 21:09

I enjoyed this and felt your island heritage and the green woods of Uk! lovely greens of differnet temperatures

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Stu Buck

Thu 19th Jan 2017 12:32

lovely stuff!

Harshit Singh

Wed 18th Jan 2017 18:05

Nice!

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