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Open Up The Door

Stood by your gate again

And watched the rain begin to pour

From far behind the aura of your door

 

 

I should have known...

That only tapes & picture phones

Could ever document the essence of your tone

 

 

'Cause, by now, I'd be informed; if you loved me

You'd walk out of your front door, alone.

 

 

                             But all you do is hide

                             While lonely me begins to wither outside

 

 

I'm waiting for you to come through with your hair let loose

And open up the door.

 

◄ Herbal Connoisseur

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Rafael

Tue 17th Jan 2017 07:15

This is actually a song I wrote and I liked the lyrics so much that I wanted to post it on here lol that's why there's sort of this predictable rhyme going on, but I'll post the song too once I"m done mixing it

Thank you for the comment Randall!

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Randall Eckstein

Tue 17th Jan 2017 04:28

I like this one. A little voyeuristic in a way-- a good way as it pulls us into the uncertain mindset of the speaker.

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