The Proud man

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I don't want no trouble

That's what he said in his mind

But his lips are lying

They boast and spout threats 

 A coward putting up a whitewash facade

Fear strikes 


Then he thinks to himself

'Is that you death? 

Don't come just yet,

I still have so many things left to..

Gulp, I better swallow my pride before I ...'



Blood goozes 

As he looses...

Beep Beep Beeeeeeeeeeeep Be..


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Sun 8th Jan 2017 17:22

Excuse my picking up on this Pablo and no disrespect but it had me thinking of a shoot out in a Clint Eastwood film - few options left and a bit of dangerous introspection.

Enjoyed reading it!


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