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You know there is a lock within you,

One you can not simply breakthrough,

A lock, that you must find the key to,


Scour your soul, your conscious, your heart,

Find it, even if you must tear yourself apart


Unlocked you will know who you are,

Find me. Even if I’m far,


Share with me what you’ve become,

And to your spell, I hope again to succumb


I held my key tight to my chest for eighteen years,

I knew it was risky to give, and it could brings tears,


When it happened, it happened so fast,

I handed over my key at last,


I gave you my virginity,

And every piece of love within me,


I gave it all,

And now I fall

◄ Tears

2017 ►


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Martin Elder

Sat 7th Jan 2017 23:28

That last line ' and now I fall' seems to sum up the whole of what you have written so well
Nice one

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