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Someone You Know but You Don't Know

Two hello smiles

simultaneously sharing complementary

good mornings together.

 

Few years later

we meet again

somewhere completely different.

 

Two hello smiles

simultaneously sharing complementary

good mornings together.

 

My friend asks

Who is that?

eagerly awaiting reply.

 

A passing face

busy City traveller

catching delayed train.

 

Two hello smiles

simultaneously sharing complementary

good mornings together.

Pushing past people in the busy rush hour crowd

◄ The Ghost of Captain Dick

Restless Nights ►

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Martin Elder

Sun 27th Nov 2016 18:42

Nice one Nigel. was this one you read a couple of weeks ago.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 25th Nov 2016 16:16

Terrific. The repetition is fabulous and expertly placed.

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