tangent
the twin paths I travel--
one consumes me
and the other is
hidden from my sight.
offset
by infinite distance
and the intangible
void between--
somewhere
within this fractured light
I am returning
to my home.
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So elegant and effortless. Thanks for sharing.
elPintor
Mon 24th Oct 2016 01:54
Thanks, all. Your opinions and thoughts are quite valuable to me. And, I just finished the movie..the bluebird scene made me cry just a little.
elP
Unmistakeably your work elP. These internal journeys always take us into deep spirals or unplumbed depths and don't necessarily need a summary but like strange plants they capture our imaginations.
Excellent. Ray
how excellent and, for me, i can only see the film k-pax when i read it. quite brilliant, its wonderful to have something so brief that fills the brain which such vivid, philosophical ideas
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elPintor
Wed 26th Oct 2016 21:44
Thanks so much, Suki..very kind of you to say so.
And, David, I must admit that "Beyond the Yellow Wood" did catch my eye.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TTAU7lLDZYU
elP
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8hMn0ilooY