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fun isn't always easy

i am enigmas
city girls
and rows of teeth
and i am tough
on you
like heavy boots
because i'm not too shy
to show you
i care
in the present thoughts
of how we might fail
when you mistake
a sense of fun, with ease
and sit back
whilst i demonstrate
how to climb a hill

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garside

Mon 31st Aug 2009 08:55

while i demonstrate how to climb a hill - great take off Emily

would consider moving the comma - after of fun -
and place a semi colon instead after the word because

like your work

steve

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