fun isn't always easy
i am enigmas
city girls
and rows of teeth
and i am tough
on you
like heavy boots
because i'm not too shy
to show you
i care
in the present thoughts
of how we might fail
when you mistake
a sense of fun, with ease
and sit back
whilst i demonstrate
how to climb a hill
garside
Mon 31st Aug 2009 08:55
while i demonstrate how to climb a hill - great take off Emily
would consider moving the comma - after of fun -
and place a semi colon instead after the word because
like your work
steve