dark bodies and gravity..
wide fields stir pre-explosive
stars in disarray--
shimmering spectral displays become
echoes confined in my atmosphere..
radio stars scream long after
their lights disappear into the dense
emptiness of heavens' mass grave.
I quite often get a feeling of awe when reading your stuff elP and that must be a good thing. Always open to interpretation like a delicate spider's web that can be destroyed when touched too roughly. Left alone it hangs suspended and attractive.
Ray
elPintor,
I like the way this makes you think of a (post Big
bang? ) sequence of `pre-explosive` continual inevitable sequence of smaller bangs turned radio-telescopically into sound. And how space does `sound` dense.
It makes one imagine the `shimmer` turning into the `scream` (I wonder where it all goes?)
A good `thinker` this one.
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elPintor
Sun 11th Sep 2016 00:28
Thanks all..glad you liked this. I really enjoy the opportunity to write in this forum.
I had a few metaphors in mind when writing this, and besides that, I'm fascinated with black holes.
elP