traveller's token

You watched the wind-up

before release..

I wondered if you noticed

the ripples spreading

as the myelin broke beyond the pitch

and time's protective sheath falling limp like milky fog.

Did you see the surge of spatial fabric

bend shapes in the distance?

Or, did your sense become null

while logic's eye became entwined

with your future human form standing frozen still?

◄ equalization

night vision ►



Fri 9th Sep 2016 23:15

Thank ya kindly for commenting, Stu..I had to change the first question..I never felt it was right, though I believe I've found the proper words now.


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Stu Buck

Thu 8th Sep 2016 15:03

excellent stuff, milky fog, oh my days thats a fine two words.


Thu 8th Sep 2016 00:52

merely extractions

..I couldn't leave either one out..

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