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THE BULLET'S AIMS

Selection    detection     projection

these are the bullet's aims

designed for subjection

singly or in a spray

like flowers

let us pray

◄ DO NOT BE FOOLED

FAMILY SPLIT ►

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raypool

Sun 7th Aug 2016 12:30

Thanks a lot for the comments and likes. I tried to copy the Knife poem Stu, in format, well spotted. I think the clearer the subject matter , the less words you need. Nice irony David! The power of the B's Mark, nice concoction.
Back to the drawing board for more precision and incision, take the plunge, etc...

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 6th Aug 2016 14:39

A bouquet of bullets, no less. Incisive and effective firepower.

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Stu Buck

Fri 5th Aug 2016 23:26

lovely use of words ray. a spray of bullets/a spray of flowers. i love that. i like the layout as well it reminds me of a piece you posted a week or so ago.

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