BLEACHED BIRTH
I was born in a toothpaste tube
squeezed from all sides
suctioned out
an afterbirth of talent pooled
which wrapped around me
as it cooled.
Watch me now as I squint and squirm
this wriggly squiggly restless worm.
Comments
this is fab ray. just fab. funny and a bit odd and dark and all sorts. brilliant.
Very clever Ray. 'An afterbirth of talent' Nice one
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raypool
Thu 14th Jul 2016 20:04
Thanks Martin - a wild idea and I'm pleased it was picked up on. A moment of madness really.
Thanks Stu: Glad it appealed. A bit barmy.
Cheers David. I like your analysis, it's nice to be looked into ! Not sure if afterbirth of talent is a compliment or just a mess but then you know me.
Ray