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My eyes are heavy
Weighted by the pennies of the dead
A day with no tears
Comes close to ending
I should let them flow
It’s hurting to hold them
So who can hold onto me today
How will my roots stay strong?
Couldn't i just let these floods
Wash my heart away
Very sad. I makes me want to cry with you.
Cate xx
Very sad and very powerful.
Isobel xx
Beautiful
Cx
Beautiful Carole...
I have felt this way many times...
xxxxxxx x
Lovely poem. It draws the reader into its mood quickly and leaves the question hanging perfectly at the end
Let it all out, lovely. Sad poem, but beautiful, and one that speaks to the sadness in all our hearts.
<Deleted User> (5646)
Mon 10th Aug 2009 00:36
The roots of this tree are steadfast and sturdy enough to with-hold the flood Carol. Let it flow and nurture the trunk and branches. The leaves will take care of themselves.
Janet.xx
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 2nd Dec 2009 23:51
flows very nicely-or not as the case may be-'a day with no tears' gotta go-am filling up! -Stef...sniff sniff.....Wilde