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MA SHARIA AMOUR

The man from Allah

checks his weapons

sanctioned by state law

and fires at will

ma sharia amour.

 

The white parachutes of love

sink to earth now red

mushroom cloud rising

with the spirits of the dead

 

and an apartment for sale

is newly free, commanding

wonderful views of paradise

in perpetuity.

 

 

 

racial violence

◄ LIFE BY RAIL

A CAUTIONARY TALE ►

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raypool

Fri 17th Jun 2016 17:37

Bang to rights David. My life has always been overshadowed by self criticism starting with a very critical upbringing , in the musical sphere especially. I am sorry too that I may have undermined your wonderful praise and as a friend given a false impression . (Don't keep saying sorry, you bastard(me)).
Actually I do think it is a very good piece on re reading it. Did I write it? I must have done.

Ray

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raypool

Thu 16th Jun 2016 23:33

Thanks David, I am so pleased you found this acceptable, as you are adept in pointing out the uncomfortable areas of life, whilst I can only draw on my sensibilities in such matters.

Likewise, thanks for your kind comments Lynn.

Thank you Laura for your like on this.

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Lynn Dye

Thu 16th Jun 2016 09:29

David, I hope you are wrong too.

Well written, Ray, powerful stuff. Excellent indeed.

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