AT WATFORD GAP

At Watford Gap

caged in the pound

my autolove lies a - bleeding

the impact took her in the side

unable to offer a thrilling ride

languishing in unholy ground

still she weeps oil

for lover's meeting

🌷(1)

love of cars

◄ SACRIFICIAL WINE

THE WAY IT'S GONNA BE ►

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Robert Mann

Sat 11th Jun 2016 11:04

Ray - I've never had this affection for four wheels, but I can appreciate the value of feelings portrayed in a good poem. Nice writing mate.
Rob

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raypool

Wed 8th Jun 2016 18:23

I know this is unfeeling , as there could have been victims involved. But hey, that's poetry!
Thanks for reading David.
Ray

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