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Black Birds

Black birds race by my window.

I see them

out of the corner

of my eye,

and sunlight fades

into dark clouds

threatening to take over

the skies.

I stare out the window

in search of them,

but there is no trace

nor feather.

But I know I saw them

as clear as daylight,

so where did they fly?

Or was it death walking by,

and was the door of change

opening again?

Only time will tell,

and as I turn away

from the window,

black birds appear,

still flying on by.

 

Black Birds

by, Melissa R. Mendelson

◄ Along the Lines of Life

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<Deleted User> (4235)

Fri 28th Aug 2009 00:58

Thank you, everyone for your comments on this poem.

And I love William Blake's work.

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Dave Bradley

Thu 27th Aug 2009 22:27

Hi Melissa

I've only just found this by following the trail from the fascinating William Blake discussion. It's hard to keep track of everything. I do like it.

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Jeff Dawson

Tue 11th Aug 2009 22:51

Hi Melissa, love the darkness (no surprise there!) and analogy of the blackbirds for death, nice one, a good diversion I feel here. Thanx for your comment on 'Noise of the night', hope youre well, jeff X

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winston plowes

Fri 31st Jul 2009 23:31

Hi Melissa, Like the philosophical / dream like message which comes through half way through this piece and continues to the end. Win x

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