Vial
With just enough light in the sky to take out
the newspapers of yesterday
and arrange them, padding in
the galvanised bin;
smoke twists
in a neighbour's garden -
I cup hand and call,
remark upon the vagaries of the weather
and the recent tree
felled on Cobb Hill.
In response I get a half-turn
and shoulder shrug, grunt
of some approximate affirmative,
and the trudge on bitten concrete
as painted door swings
clicks closed.
I breathe in the settling embers,
arms akimbo, glance to my own,
palm-shadowed indoor.
On a locket on the counter
the liquid lurks like summer scent,
but splash it on and I'm burnt
by the cold slip of human heart.
It's him, and it's me,
a day sterilised, caught and labelled;
we're both hung out like the washing
on a dew-flecked
morning line.
Peter knaggs
Mon 6th Jun 2016 14:12
David, I think this is the poem of the month that I like the best, so far. OK, that's not meritocratic, but I do have good taste, even though I say so myself. Well done, great poem.