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I fell in love with... by Zakiya Johnson

 

YOU TOLD ME YOU LOVED ME

YOU said we will last forever

YOU said the line will never cut short

YOU SAID THE SPARK WOULD NEVER FADE

 

I fell in love with a liar

I still have the letter

YOU told me you loved me

YOU said you will always be there for me

 

I fell in love with a UNTRUSTWORTHY person

YOU decide to spread my secrets

YOU decide to leave me by myself

Where were you when you said you would be there

 

I fell in love with a CHEATER

I made you part of my crew

I helped you fit

Didn't know YOU would go behind my back

 

I fell in love with a FOOL

I will no longer live in the past

I will no longer live with you

I will no longer love you anymore

I AM DONE FALLING IN LOVE

WITH A LIAR

WITH A CHEATER

WITH AN UNTRUSTWORTHY PERSON AND WITH A FOOL

 

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Abstract Mystery

Fri 27th May 2016 15:41

Thankyou for your reveiw but after i get out of school i want to see your poems but i will be posting more because it seems i have found some more of my old poems

elPintor

Thu 26th May 2016 23:14

Hey there,

We all have our lessons to learn about love, or what sometimes masquerades as "love"..

This piece transitions along very well and has a clear structure..and a great summary at its end..

Enjoyed reading, Abstract,

elPintor

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