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RE: "I love rain" (05/20/2016)

it loves you, too
though I'm sure I've said it before
and it was more special the first time.

you've got a face that goes with most weather 
though my blood feels heavier when it's raining
so maybe that's why the rain
loves you more

weighted down, fevered
against my bedsheets
sometimes that's where your face stamps me
in the middle of the night
branded and searing
to the tune of pitter-pattering raindrops
dancing on my roof.
 

i love the rain it loves you back unkillable

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Jackie Phillips

Mon 23rd May 2016 12:38

The most current award for a line i am most jealous of not writing myself goes to;

you've got a face that goes with most weather

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John Bastard

Sun 22nd May 2016 01:00

hm.
satirical wasn't my intention, but that's a very interesting interpretation. what makes it satirical?

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Sat 21st May 2016 16:26

Love this! It's satirical but with an undertone that suggests that there is a deeper emotional reading to be found

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