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full fat shit times

last week a milk truck overturned on the motorway

causing several fatalities and dozens of casualties

and we drove past the stretch of road about twenty

minutes after it happened and saw the bodies laid

out and the cars crushed and the lorry driver whimpering

and the mothers crying and the paramedics terrible

frantic as people died in their arms and the milk

was everywhere drying in the sun and mixing with

the blood they hadn’t mopped up yet and everything

was a paler shade of what it had been before but all

i could think about was how much it stank.

◄ serotonin

katteken ►

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Stu Buck

Fri 20th May 2016 16:33

thanks steve, babble is right i think!

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steve pottinger

Fri 20th May 2016 15:02

The breathless babble of this is really effective, Stu. Worth reading and re-reading. Thanks.

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Stu Buck

Mon 16th May 2016 12:15

cheers both. in france while i was living there a truck carrying 'st agur' blue cheese overturned on the (obviously empty) motorway, causing a stench miles in radius. i cant think of a much worse spill...

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raypool

Sun 15th May 2016 22:52

The title great, the presentation like an unrolling script, formidable and compulsive reading. I know its a complete side issue, but milk trains never crashed before Beeching's motorway madness unravelled. Would we say motorways are civilized places? I think not.

Ray

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John Coopey

Sun 15th May 2016 21:22

Powerful imagery, Stu.

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