I WOULD HAVE WAITED

I would have waited there

there under the scalloped canopy

where the firebuckets nestled

where a shadowed door waited too

with its brass handle loose with too much use

 

there I would have waited too

so that the day could progress

at a pace that suited the sun

in its lazy arc

before the day turned dark,

and the flower bed sprang

and the dusty broom loitered

 

so I waited more and more

and would have gladly called that spot my own

and though a train would never come

I could be there still

where the dream flowed in.

There was nothing I could do,

life like the train departing

 

and still, in the dark

when the door became lost

I would have waited

still I would have waited.

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◄ PARK BENCH

A TRIBUTE FROM SIR TERRY WOGAN ►

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raypool

Fri 29th Apr 2016 11:41

Thanks for the appreciation Martin . I did go wistful on this one.

Wolfie: I thought I thanked you before on this, but I can't now find it! Anyway, lovely to get your fulsome comments and obviously eye to eye as always.

Ray

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Martin Elder

Thu 28th Apr 2016 21:48

I like it Ray , speaks to me of what could have been if only circumstances had been different, as with so many things in life. great poem.

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