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I loved my rabbits so much

I set them free

Opened the cage

Threw away the key

 

Two shakes of a cotton tail

One left right left of a nose

And back inside

I found them

A crater the size of

A corn circle

Dug

In my not so

Pristine lawn

 

MORAL?

 

If you really, really love someone

Lock them up

 

                                                                           Or

 

Choose to love

A more sentient

Creature

 

                                                                            Or

 

Looking at the ruddy, muddy mess

In my backyard

 

Choose not to love at all.

 

 

 

 

 

◄ A Dream

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winston plowes

Mon 20th Jul 2009 23:35

interesting angle Joan, great idea. Winston

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Francine

Sat 18th Jul 2009 17:36

Love this Joan!
I choose moral # 2...
even though I love little bunnies : )

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Dave Bradley

Sat 18th Jul 2009 12:10

Hi Joan

Funny and well balanced - not a word out of place - and so so true

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Isobel

Sat 18th Jul 2009 09:41

A humorous poke at the love game Joan - well done.

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