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Winter

you are like january when you come over and

you cry so much your tears saturate the ground

and the mud and the root balls of gnarled trees

like gargantuan florets of aging broccoli bringing them

crashing down in a death metal drum roll.

i turn on the s.a.d light but the bulb is broken

and it dies like everything must with a faceless pop

so you leave and from my window i see

the great big sky and its is falling, falling just for you.

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Stu Buck

Thu 17th Mar 2016 11:17

cheers jon! glad you liked it.

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Jon

Wed 16th Mar 2016 22:51

great poem...moving...the broccoli references are ace as is the s.a.d. light with a broken bulb.

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Stu Buck

Wed 16th Mar 2016 22:36

Thanks martin. I am glad you enjoyed it. Will I be seeing you in Manchester for UTF's 'Verse Case Scenario' in August? Its in the same place I believe.

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Martin Elder

Tue 15th Mar 2016 11:06

Another great piece Stu. I love the 'root balls of great trees' and 'the great big sky and its is falling, falling just for you.'
Fab

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