when i love you next

when i love you next it will be gypsum

a worm of blood under tobacco crepe skin

 

a soiled family portrait,

seeping, diseased, sepia

 

it will be march in svalbard

sun         rise

sun         set

 

when i love you next it will be embers

forest fires , apple cores and faded lace

 

a snapped breath drawn out to cretaceous sigh

 

a tapered prayer, a hail mary,

ascension.

◄ i am aging like everyone else

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Stu Buck

Thu 10th Mar 2016 19:28

thanks both. little baby buck is taking up a lot of my writing time at the moment but still managing the odd one. glad you enjoyed.

Lan

Wed 9th Mar 2016 11:04

Wow! Don't know what else to say really, but this is great, really enjoyed it. Love all the images, but particularly the Svalbard lines x

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raypool

Tue 8th Mar 2016 20:20

Quite gothic, like Rossetti or Byron maybe, Stu. Very colourful imagery and so expressive. Almost a transition to afterlife. I love tobacco crepe skin!

Ray

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