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I Try

I try

 

I’m not the best lover 

can’t dance much either

never won a poker game

never guessed the jelly beans

haven’t won a sweep steaks of any kind

failed to roll 300

never skydived 

don’t really like vegetables 

prefer burgers to pretty much anything

afraid of the ocean from time to time 

Jaws was mean but brilliant

I can catch a ball

any ball, any time

I’ll BS about anything 

we can hang and say nothing

in the best way

I enjoy your company 

I got ping pong jokes

for days 

my point is

i try 

i don’t always do my best

after the fact sucks 

just know I try 

and I can do 

better

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Comments

Bruce Strosnider

Thu 4th Feb 2016 22:36

try putting a line after each line that seems to need a why.
i've never skydived. why
after the fact sucks
sucks doesn't say enough

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