What a dialogue !

Life -->Death

"Why do
People see your
Behaviour uncouth?"

Death-->Life

"It is simple
You are
A savoury falsehood,
While I
A bitter truth!"

life death ironic paradoxical

◄ Don't mistake me for a fool

Youth ►

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Fri 8th Jan 2016 14:19

Is it?
Sometimes we reflect certain ideas we may not reach a consensus on with others. In poetry we are not supposed to buy the idea.But appreciate it if we must we have to do so.
The point is conveying a message in an interesting or creative manner.Poetry is all about bringing something new or giving something already there a fresh touch!

Any ways I have got positive response for this poetry on www.poetfreak.com ,www.hellopoetry.com and www.allpoetry.com
Thank you for the positive feedback.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 6th Jan 2016 21:45

Bit strong, Alum?

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