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The Piano Concerto

 

 

The Piano Concerto

 

the friend who perseveres

snared me

with words - weed - wine

and music -

the notes unfettered

flying  across the ceiling

running up the walls and

swinging from the light fixtures

dripping

falling

cascading over my consciousness

in a delirium of sound -

the melody was lost

each crystal note caught its own life

and leaped gleefully about

to chase the sound ahead

or behind

or shining in between

never have I heard music like it since -

sober

 

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

◄ Come, Run With Me

Television Moon (after the Moon Landing, July, 1969) ►

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Andy N

Tue 14th Jul 2009 16:21

nice ending in particular - Cynthia... Really enjoyed this piece...

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 30th Jun 2009 14:41

Good question, Isobel, but, no ... the attraction was bracketed by the most important aspects - words and music. My friend and I have always argued a lot about writing and we have enjoyed together great music of all genres. Stimulating conversation alone can give me a 'high'.

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Isobel

Mon 29th Jun 2009 17:48

An interesting one Cynthia - are you trying to say that you wouldn't have opened up to/with that particular friend had you not been inebriated?

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Dave Bradley

Sat 27th Jun 2009 18:43

Cynthia

Thank you for the very kind comment on mine. I've been reading yours and like it all a great deal. You seem to relish life. The mix of gusto and sensitivity, vitality and reflection, hunger for life and reflection is very appealing.

Dave

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