Double victory
My foe cluttered down the pit
He painstakingly dug for me
To pitch down
Head first
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Comments
I see you`ve tried a bit of shaping with this Alem. I like
the possibilities but, bearing in mind that poetry is mainly
about the words, It is very difficult to fit the sense of what we say into a particular shape (which I think will always be merely suggestive) I think we would need much more sophisticated apps to make it really meaningful.
But - in the meantime - we should experiment now and again.
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Alem Hailu G/Kristos
Sat 19th Dec 2015 13:48
Yes poetry is a creative art.I was trying my hands on the physical appearance of the poetry.Thank you for the comment!