Herod
Herod
Mother bears her child
and prays the bright, guiding, light
is not a rocket.
Comments
Neat - and menacingly relevant - haiku Ian.
So short, so succinct, so thought provoking. A clever little poem which I liked very much.
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Stu Buck
Sat 12th Dec 2015 12:23
nice haiku ian, even has the pivot line in the middle. so many 'haikus' ignore the rules, this becoming something else. although i suppose if we followed all the rules we'd all be writing about frogs and herons... anyway i digress. excellent and relevant.