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Mother bears her child

and prays the bright, guiding, light

is not a rocket.

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◄ Broke

Black Christmas ►


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Stu Buck

Sat 12th Dec 2015 12:23

nice haiku ian, even has the pivot line in the middle. so many 'haikus' ignore the rules, this becoming something else. although i suppose if we followed all the rules we'd all be writing about frogs and herons... anyway i digress. excellent and relevant.

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 11th Dec 2015 14:11

Neat - and menacingly relevant - haiku Ian.

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Jackie Phillips

Fri 11th Dec 2015 00:11

So short, so succinct, so thought provoking. A clever little poem which I liked very much.

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