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life is but a dance,

from the fast to the slow 

from the heartbreaking to the breath taking

we live a dance


work is merely  the box step

going round and round again

ralationships are like the conga

kick a leg out only to bring it back again

life is just a dance


prosicution of the steps are key

if you fail you need to get back into the rythm of success

back into the rythm of happiness

back into the rythm of life


◄ once in a dream

Going nuclear ►


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M.C. Newberry

Thu 26th Nov 2015 17:24

I enjoyed the premise of these lines - taking up the "all the world's a stage..." from a certain Will Shakespeare.
I especially relished "From the heartbreaking to the breath
Some of the misspelt words add to the Elizabethan "feel"
of the whole.

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