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THE UNPROTECTED STREET

he smoked roll - ups

drank copious amounts

watched girls of a certain age

      his mind afire with hopeless dreams

      he played tricks with words on a page

      had a healthy disrespect

for sanctimonious smiles

cursed his way through every day

lived life upon the tiles.

      When he finally passed away

      he left a wretched smell and

      a song of sadness hung in the air

like an anthem into hell.

His like was always doomed to fail

their suffering complete and yet

      that breed survived the flak

      on the unprotected street

      so as we take our daily bread

and walk the caring path,

remember those whose grief was real

and then the aftermath.

 

 

     

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raypool

Sat 21st Nov 2015 16:20

I hate to draw uneasy parallels, David, but you could almost suggest your path could be the straight and narrow. You're really the lone warrior, a hero in my book.

Ray

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raypool

Sat 21st Nov 2015 10:58

Thanks so much David. We are exactly in harmony with this theme I know. I read it again today and had to insert a word on the penultimate line! The grand send -off usually escapes the underdog.

always nice to get your response.

cheers Ray

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