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IN – BETWEEN DAY (an ansgt poem of the 90's)

Bored.

Dead town.

Dead people.

Wanna get drunk or something.

Wanna get stoned or something.

Anything. Done. Now. This second.

 

Need a fuck.

Need no aggravation,

from the thing called love.

 

Need cash.

Need smokes or

even a meal,

while work's all I kind of look forward to.

Sad really.

 

Need luck.

Need a new head.

Clouded in hash smoke.

Bollacks I need bed.

Bliss.

Piss.

The lot of it.

◄ The Bass (96)

HISTORIC AGE OF EXCELLENCE (1996) ►

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DavidAddington

Sun 15th Nov 2015 17:02

Cheers Colin. yeah, I suppose it works still today. Cheers

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Sun 15th Nov 2015 08:45

I know the feeling but mine would have been 1979 and there was no work to look forward to just the dole queue - always wanted love tho.

Enjoyed the poem - not sure you need to add an explanation - let the words and title speak for themselves.

Cheers. I'd skin up for old time's sake but I've given up lol.

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DavidAddington

Sat 14th Nov 2015 14:13

I was only 25 at the time and trying to write a few poems for a small press mag called barfly, which was an angst type thing full of broken people, language, and foul language etc.

I sent a group of poems to them but never had any luck and this was probably the best of the bunch.

I feel it captures one of those arrogant moments we all can have at times when we're young and frustrated. It is a product of its time.

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