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The Bass (96)

Lagoon and aqua English blue.

Midget white horses roll with silver eyes.

Their hooves curling forward then crash,

as the surf storms in yards behind.

 

Tremors invade the sandbanks and gullies,

as the slack creeps in before.

This is the world of the sea perch.

The bass. Striking hard and hitting fast.

 

Armoured in silver and streaking shine,

as he terrorises the rock pools with stomach.

Crustaceans and sandeels are his prey.

 

His spine weapon dorsal cuts at the surface,

like some awesome shark. Big mouth open wide.

Cruising as he scares off a wandering mullet,

his brother of kinds.

 

An angler stands fixed with a hypnotic stare,

as he tries to catch the bass with a lure,

but this elegant sea perch isn't so easily tricked.

 

And high tide has flooded full. The bass sinks back,

to await the ebb. Alert and unified.

Naturefishingsea

◄ INFLUENZA (95)

IN – BETWEEN DAY (an ansgt poem of the 90's) ►

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DavidAddington

Sat 14th Nov 2015 14:03

Thanks for the comment raypool. Yes very much like Hughes as I only first stared writing poetry from 1994 onwards when I was at college studying Hughes as part of English GCSE, so the influence rubbed off a tad. I have another poem about fishing for trout in Lake District which I think I will post up today after editing. That is also very Hughes like.

The Bass was one of my first poems to be published in an anthology (although I suspect it was one of those vanity publishing books), I never bought the book for that reason.

I've been working on a blog now for all my poetry and music, but can't decide on which platform to use: Blogger or Wix make a website. Do you have a blog or website? Well I'll check your profile.

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raypool

Fri 13th Nov 2015 20:43

Nice poem David. It reminds me of Ted Hughes in the subject matter. I reckon this must be a fond subject for you. Quite an aggressive style if I may say, which seems to suit the imagery.

regards Ray

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